CompletedEmotion's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Make Me Feel So Alive]

Awesome!

I love it! Any chance I could try out a remix?
-CEMO

giovanni808 responds:

Of course you can, and we are glad you liked it! But if you remix it, remember to link to the original song, and give credit to Jonrbe and Chris E. :) Send a pm for further info!

[-Orr- ST Suspense]

WOW

Thats exactly the kind of music I'd feel if I were sneaking around in a large warehouse, gun in hand, looking for what I know is there, but cannot see...

I see a shadow move behind me, I turn around and see a blur of man and cloth, I race after him, but he had evaded me yet again. I put a red exclaimation mark above my head to show my alertness. That I am on to who ever is there.

My squadmate lets out a muffled yelp. He falls in heap to the ground, his neck broken. I fear for my life.

David, I've been following your music for about three years now, and it NEVER ceases to amaze me. You're talent is astounding, I wish I had that kind of ability and patience. Is there anything I don't like about this song? No. Not a thing.

-CEMO

DavidOrr responds:

Wow, that's a great scenario! Very creative :)

Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoy my music!

[Runescape - Theme Song]

Uh.

I'm not the best musician in the world, nor do I clam to be. But I hear deMIDIfied music. As in, MIDI file thrown into FL, and the instruments replaced. Even if its not, it sounds like it. I'm sorry, but I just can't put this on my awesome list.

JakesFable responds:

This is really why I think twice before I make remakes of these because some people just want to think that I steal witch I didn't do such crap and have proved people wrong in the past that I don't. Sorry man your going to have to get your facts right next time you accuse someone of stealing midi and changing the instruments..

[She broked my heart]

Mmmm.

I like it! I really do! Its pretty expressive and gets the point across without becoming lost in digital goo. I subtract 2 stars because it really left me wanting more, and I feel like the some of the emotion is lost when the song hits 0:28 seconds, having those straight notes like that was a dagger, and it cut in way too deeply. One thing you may wish to try to help this song out is to add some reverb to the piano, to give it that fullness of sound.

Another thing that you may wish to do, if you recorded this as MIDI data, is to variate the Velocity at which the notes are played at, it sounds really robotic the way that every note is the same velocity, which also takes away from the lifelike feel this song strives to achieve.

Other than that, you have a winner!

PM if you have any changes that are made to this song, or if you have the MIDI data, I'd like to take a look at it!

-CE

Webzex responds:

Thanks man,Will do ^^ I plan to make Improvements in the very near future

[Edge of Faith]

Well done, mate!

Dude. You don't need another review saying the same thing. But you get one anyway. This is a great song. Perfect. I love where you went with it, and I really want a direct uncompressed mp3 of it to put on my iPod.

WELL DONE!

NemesisTheory responds:

Thank you. :)
I actually forgot to compress this for a bit since it's still on 192kbs, oops! lol

[SplitPersonality - Voices (NG)]

Very Impressive

Something tells me that the review directly below me, about this being a 0able song, will not be around for much longer. C'mon, at least give a reason! Well, I think it was a fantastic bit, and I'm not even a fan of this kind of music. After the 2:00 mark, I really felt involved in the song, and thats something to say. No huge complaints for the construction, it was very well put together! At 3:05, the bassline really reminds me of an Australian Didjeridoo. Very nice addition!

Keep it up!

Nav responds:

Haha, it's not even here anymore! Thanks for reviewing! :)

[Halo-Lone Rider {DEMO V2}]

Its not the studio you make it in...

Nonono. The distortion on this was horrible. Its not the studio you make the song in, its the cleverness that you put into it. I have somthing that may help you out here. PM or AIM me if you want to talk about it (don't worry, what I have is completly free of charge).

R0tt3n-Appl3 responds:

lol dude, i know it was horrible, i've gotten it in plenty of reviews. just relax, i'm clever enough to make my own music! good music, that is

[Elysium RMX - Shen]

Oi!

Hey Shen! It's Trancemind, I have a new account.

Lol, I remember the original recordings of the vocals....I still have them around somewhere.... Great Work!

Shenkhar responds:

Lol! new account. Nice to hear from ya again :D.

[Indian Funeral]

Not sure what to think

This is a really intesting idea for a song, but there were many things that took away from it's quality. Firstly, let me compliment you on the authentic sounds of the instruments, well done.

A couple of things to note. The notes were generally flat, and some of them were just completly bad-sounding. It almost hurts to listen to the flute screech. Also, the flute in the beginning has an unbearable crunchy noise.

Later on in the song, you change the melody completly and throw in a modern beat. That distracted from the original intent of the song.

Sorry mate, but I think you would have been better off with just the second half of the song. I'd be interested to hear the second half developed a little more.
-[CE]

DrSalvadork responds:

Hmm... Making a song out of the second half, eh? Maybe I will at some point.
I also thought that the modern beat might ruin it, but it came as an impulse so I left it in cause it sounded fun.
I don't really know how to write melodies, I made this one with the keyboard and honestly thought it sounded fine, but I guess you hear it differently if you're experienced at music making.
If you're referring to the high pitch notes then I get what you mean but I wouldn't know how to make it better.
Also I thought I'd make a secondary melody that would play at the same time with the main one but didn't know how to do that.
As for the crunchiness of the flute I only used the presets and I pretty much think that's what an Indian flute sounds like.
But hey, thanks for an extremely helpful review! Have a good day.

[All For U]

Well laid out

Starting off with a nice bass was a good choice for this song, the piano melted nicely into the mix. The melody however, is slightly lacking. It sounds like the melody from "I love Lucy". Thats is fine, but I don't know how that really works for this song.

The drums were a little too, hippityhoppity for this song, but that could be just my taste, I don't know. All in all, this was a well-laid out track, minus 2 stars for bad EQ on the bass.

Finess101 responds:

I was gon start the piano first but good thing i didn't right. The melody for the hook comes from that show you can blame my Aunt for getting the tune in my head lol but i thought it went with it...."All For U" is what it sounds like it's saying.

I think it's just you...about the drums lol. Thanks for the comments man just tryna be real good and if you could PM me tips or what not about the bad EQ on the bass that'll be tight.