Score: 10

"Very Impressive"

submission: SplitPersonality - Voices (NG)

date: December 1, 2008

Something tells me that the review directly below me, about this being a 0able song, will not be around for much longer. C'mon, at least give a reason! Well, I think it was a fantastic bit, and I'm not even a fan of this kind of music. After the 2:00 mark, I really felt involved in the song, and thats something to say. No huge complaints for the construction, it was very well put together! At 3:05, the bassline really reminds me of an Australian Didjeridoo. Very nice addition!

Keep it up!

Score: 10

"Not bad! In fact, I like it!"

submission: -clip- A Moment to Breathe

date: November 25, 2008

This song, while short, really gets the point across. I think that the musical scene that you were trying to produce was one of a short period where, in a battle or fight, everything just slows down for a bit, and you have time to think about yourself, your mind, your body, your strategy for moving forward. Not just a battle though, this scene could apply to life in general. Just stop, slow down, and take a little time to think. Life is much easier if you know what you are going to do to make it the best in can possibly be. Clipnotdone, you're like me. I enjoy a nice, slow piano, that rings its tune outward into a slow decay. Sorrowful, perhaps, but it gives a strong emotion and people instantly know where you, the composer, want to go with the song and where you want to take the listener. You've done it, you really have. Congratulations on a beautiful piece. However, if you can, it might be beneficial to look at some of the equalization, the decay kind of melts together a bit. I know, Newgrounds is a pain when you have to compress your songs down into oblivion. That being the only thing I'd change. Great work, I look forward to more!

Score: 6

"Its not the studio you make it in..."

submission: Halo-Lone Rider {DEMO V2}

date: March 27, 2008

Nonono. The distortion on this was horrible. Its not the studio you make the song in, its the cleverness that you put into it. I have somthing that may help you out here. PM or AIM me if you want to talk about it (don't worry, what I have is completly free of charge).

Score: 10

"Oi!"

submission: Elysium RMX - Shen

date: February 25, 2008

Hey Shen! It's Trancemind, I have a new account.

Lol, I remember the original recordings of the vocals....I still have them around somewhere.... Great Work!

Score: 5

"Not sure what to think"

submission: Indian Funeral

date: February 22, 2008

This is a really intesting idea for a song, but there were many things that took away from it's quality. Firstly, let me compliment you on the authentic sounds of the instruments, well done.

A couple of things to note. The notes were generally flat, and some of them were just completly bad-sounding. It almost hurts to listen to the flute screech. Also, the flute in the beginning has an unbearable crunchy noise.

Later on in the song, you change the melody completly and throw in a modern beat. That distracted from the original intent of the song.

Sorry mate, but I think you would have been better off with just the second half of the song. I'd be interested to hear the second half developed a little more.
-[CE]

Score: 8

"Well laid out"

submission: All For U

date: February 21, 2008

Starting off with a nice bass was a good choice for this song, the piano melted nicely into the mix. The melody however, is slightly lacking. It sounds like the melody from "I love Lucy". Thats is fine, but I don't know how that really works for this song.

The drums were a little too, hippityhoppity for this song, but that could be just my taste, I don't know. All in all, this was a well-laid out track, minus 2 stars for bad EQ on the bass.